tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post3308342168992174062..comments2023-05-11T09:48:33.992-04:00Comments on Christine's Cottage: Query Letter - the best of a motley batchUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post-51318472668306250662009-04-17T13:07:00.000-04:002009-04-17T13:07:00.000-04:00Thanks, Suzette! Anonymous, I did see that part o...Thanks, Suzette! Anonymous, I did see that part of Nathan's blog, but somehow filling in the blanks made it longer. ???? (scratching my head)Nighfalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01745824744507928211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post-60611763524768470352009-04-17T10:10:00.000-04:002009-04-17T10:10:00.000-04:00Your book sounds great! Keep plugging away; with t...Your book sounds great! Keep plugging away; with the help of lovely Anon you should have it all sorted out in no time. ;)Suzette Saxtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06401538008029407734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post-27552028747463998962009-04-14T17:06:00.000-04:002009-04-14T17:06:00.000-04:00Hi again!
Oh, and just in case you haven't seen i...Hi again!<br /><br />Oh, and just in case you haven't seen it yet, you might scroll through Nathan's blog for his post named something like: "formula for writing a query."<br /><br />It simplifies it and breaks it down so beautifully. That has what's been helping me get a better (hopefully) understanding of what it should include.<br /><br />Kind regards,<br /><br />AnonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post-31012600823074319772009-04-14T17:00:00.000-04:002009-04-14T17:00:00.000-04:00Thanks so much, Anon! I have to laugh here, becau...Thanks so much, Anon! I have to laugh here, because if you think THIS is confusing, you should have seen the version I sent Nathan. :D<br /><br />I hear what you are saying about one paragraph, but at the same time, when I look at other queries at The Query Shark, she is usually asking for more plot details than one paragraph provides.<br /><br />So... I will be interested to see what the other Nighfalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01745824744507928211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300095395388562446.post-79673195634991297862009-04-14T16:47:00.000-04:002009-04-14T16:47:00.000-04:00Hi Christine,
Thank you for posting your query. (I...Hi Christine,<br />Thank you for posting your query. (I am the Anon from Nathan's site.)<br /><br />IF you would like my *amateur* feedback, here it is. Again, you probably know more than me.<br /><br />And, please, please delete this if it is too personal or offends as that is NOT my intention.<br /><br />Anyway, reading through your query letter that you just posted,<br /><br />I get a little Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com